Shows very clearly what can be wrong even though so much is right too.
Darren White Today, 05:08 PM#13, last first 2 lines of last stanza... fabulous... lovely imagery through out...
Firemajic Today, 04:50 PM#13... Last line sums this poem up perfectly... lust is fleeting, and never enough...love your straight forward poetic style, Tuesday....
What Happens When Someone Dies?