Snow White had one son with
7 split personalities.
She spent many years trying
her best , to raise him into
the young man
I jumped into Chapter 18 just before midnight, and shook up my normal pattern. Usually my big action scenes end a chapter, and the start of the next chapter
vranger Today, 08:19 AMI wouldn't give it too much thought. It's a matter of being authentic to the time and if there are idioms they used, just use them.
TheMightyAz Today, 07:20 AM
Does this sentence phrased correctly and effectively?
The sentence:
Puellamagi Today, 09:51 AM"A scarlet haze covered the crucibles while their shafts stretched upwards, like sharpened arrows, to the cross vaults