You could just write short stories and get feedback on those. Then you can apply the feedback on those to your novel. Similar to what I'm doing, except
TheMightyAz Today, 09:22 PMSo it sounds like you completely agreed with my point, but for some reason decided to twist it 180 degrees. This is not conducive to constructive conversation.
vranger Today, 09:18 PMI can relate to your sister. In my teenage years I
also hated my curls and envied anyone with long
straight hair, especially the guys back
I Wish More People Would Share Their Process
I work by building up. First, I tell the story and show a little. Then I gradually replace narration with sensory images. The result, hopefully, is a
EternalGreen Today, 09:25 PM