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    Firemajic

    Tyrant

    Your first line is stunning and completely fabulous... BUT .. for me, this went sideways and many of your beautiful lines were lost in word debris....

    Firemajic Today, 04:24 PM Go to last post
    Firemajic

    Isolated

    I loved your poem... I would love to see you offering critique... here is why. You have a good understanding of what works ... I know because I have

    Firemajic Today, 04:16 PM Go to last post
    Firemajic

    Rear View

    This is lovely Your imagery paints a perfect picture...I love the "rear view"... it makes a cool metaphor in so many ways... clever of you

    Firemajic Today, 04:08 PM Go to last post
    Firemajic

    Happily Ever After

    yeah, this does need some work... there is some good bones, but it feels rushed and chaotic...take some time to go over your work, and think about your

    Firemajic Today, 04:04 PM Go to last post
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