Cobwebs on walls,
Stains over bedsheets,
Food a little burnt always,
Not a prompt response for calls incoming,
A calm,
Can I jump the gun? I got off to a slow start on Chapter 17, just 500 words each two nights in a row. Night before last I got out 1500 words, though,
vranger Today, 05:05 AM
Does this come off as a coincidence in my plot and can I fix it?
A cop with good instincts catches a lot of badguys exactly the way you describe. They know when to look where and for who. I know a retired cop who would
MistWolf Today, 05:13 AM