Ok, I didn't get that, so let's give it a try:
"I always approached cooking with confidence until the night I decided to prepare a dessert
#12:
The sound of metal running:
There were two boys in the playground
when I was young who
gave up this sound
If it gets rejected too many times you might have to "re-open" the story and work on it again, though. I don't like "revisiting" stories,
EternalGreen Today, 10:17 PM
Over-thinking, or legit issue (regarding social awareness in my writing)
Turner Diaries is a good case-study because while it certainly has artistic merit (or at least artistic competency) it is severely lacking in the realms
BornForBurning Today, 10:53 PM