Thank you as always. What I'm going for is a Raymond Chandler like protagonist. Sarcastic, cynical, snaring, scathing etc. BUT, this is a 13 year old,
TheMightyAz Today, 06:38 PMAnd I thought I was facing a backlog of ideas. LOL I'd better put on my thinking cap and lengthen my list if I don't want to look like a poor cousin!
vranger Today, 06:26 PM
Where Do The Commas Go Here?
I get you now - that could portray such a focal character quite well. That's one reason why critiquing snippets can be fraught - not knowing enough about
Phil Istine Today, 06:44 PM