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    Foxee

    FMC cutting her hair

    I see you mention that FMC is a clothes horse in the question but in the excerpt she's not really reacting to stripping her would-be killer. To me that's

    Foxee Today, 04:02 AM Go to last post
    TheMightyAz

    Is This Too Vague And Artsy?

    You're the second person to make that point, and I'm the third person to agree. I'll strike it out in the next draft.

    TheMightyAz Today, 03:57 AM Go to last post
    TheMightyAz

    Midnight disaster sentences

    I often keep notes of my worse sentences. I call them short stories.

    TheMightyAz Today, 03:55 AM Go to last post
    Foxee

    Is This Too Vague And Artsy?

    Pardon if I'm repeating anything anyone else has said, didn't read the whole discussion, just the OP.

    This was great until the last sentence

    Foxee Today, 03:52 AM Go to last post
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