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Paradelle Form

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This is a modern form of poetry,
created as a parody, mocking the
Villanelle form. The original formís
lines are intended to be nonsense.
I have taken a slightly serious approach...
tell me what you think.

Always Forever

Death passed away
Death passed away
Lost in her ages
Lost in her ages
Passed ages lost
Away in her death

Will you meet me on the other side
Will you meet me on the other side
Where time stands still and linger never
Where time stands still and linger never
Will the other side still linger, meet me,
Where you and time stands on

Light shimmers the path pebbled and placid
Light shimmers the path pebbled and placid
Unseen ghost whittle white cliffs horizons
Unseen ghost whittle white cliffs horizons
Ghost light and whittle the unseen path
Pebbled white cliffs shimmers placid horizons

In death, other ages passed away
Unseen, will the white ghost still linger on
Her pebbled path stands placid, shimmers
And the cliffs side whittle time
Where light horizons
meet you and me

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  1. TuesdayEve's Avatar
    Would like to suggest an edit bottom
    for the original post ..
    Or am I missing it? Thanks.
    Updated February 25th, 2018 at 04:00 PM by TuesdayEve
  2. RhythmOvPain's Avatar
    You could probably sell that to a lyricist and make a mint.
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