Action that paints the scene:
Wrong:
Laura sat down
Right:
Laura looked about for a chair that was not caked with
I was thinking again on this thread and what you are trying to do. Which is writing a story continuously without stopping. I think a decent way to generate
Theglasshouse Today, 02:33 AMThis is good point. Prior to the current version of my writing, I did try to emphasize more of the voices and they became goofy for a rather serious story.
Sir-KP Today, 02:00 AM
Character mannerisms
I know how this works but I'm talking about when it's done wrong and the problems that are brought up either way.
danielvaldez90323 Today, 03:33 AMSent from my VS835 using