My favorite poem of the day. I literally felt in my chest those moments that you mentioned. Just before something is said, or when two people can just
Annie. Marie Today, 05:03 PMI like how you're mentioning something to serious as a solution for a very heart sinking issue.
I like the use of a big solution for that of a
Yes, that stage between before and after is fleeting but a very anxious one. The only edit I would suggest is changing "on" to "over".
Annie. Marie Today, 05:00 PM
Does this fragment reads as I want it to?
Hey, Puellamagi! Nice to hear from Russia.
Foxee Today, 05:09 PMFirst, I love your ideas in this excerpt.
Second, there are many ways something like