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    Annie. Marie

    Meet Me in the Silence

    My favorite poem of the day. I literally felt in my chest those moments that you mentioned. Just before something is said, or when two people can just

    Annie. Marie Today, 05:03 PM Go to last post
    Annie. Marie


    I like how you're mentioning something to serious as a solution for a very heart sinking issue.
    I like the use of a big solution for that of a

    Annie. Marie Today, 05:01 PM Go to last post
    Annie. Marie

    Tipping Point

    Yes, that stage between before and after is fleeting but a very anxious one. The only edit I would suggest is changing "on" to "over".

    Annie. Marie Today, 05:00 PM Go to last post
    Annie. Marie

    Bones in the Candle Light

    I loved this so much. I think you have a great writing style and an amazing use of words. The repetition was properly placed. The imagery was great. I'd

    Annie. Marie Today, 04:58 PM Go to last post
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