I like how you're mentioning something to serious as a solution for a very heart sinking issue.
I like the use of a big solution for that of a
Yes, that stage between before and after is fleeting but a very anxious one. The only edit I would suggest is changing "on" to "over".
Annie. Marie Today, 05:00 PMI loved this so much. I think you have a great writing style and an amazing use of words. The repetition was properly placed. The imagery was great. I'd
Annie. Marie Today, 04:58 PM
Meet Me in the Silence
My favorite poem of the day. I literally felt in my chest those moments that you mentioned. Just before something is said, or when two people can just
Annie. Marie Today, 05:03 PM