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  1. TuesdayEve's Avatar
    Thank you so much Anita... they are special!

    Thank you Winston. It’s an appreciated
    compliment.
  2. Winston's Avatar
    As a paraeducator, my wife rode the bus on occasion. She supervised special needs kids.
    If she had your gift of words, I'm sure she would paint a similar picture.
    Updated July 23rd, 2018 at 07:25 PM by Winston
  3. Anita M Shaw's Avatar
    Oh, Love It!! Reminds me of my middle son, now 32. Add to no coat, etc, no shoes for him . . .

    I'd click that like button, but I'm not seeing one. Great job, anyway!!!!
  4. kaminoshiyo's Avatar
    Charming poem.

    I really liked some of the lines "If I knew, I'd walk backwards/I'd walk faster"
  5. RhythmOvPain's Avatar
    You could probably sell that to a lyricist and make a mint.
  6. TuesdayEve's Avatar
    Would like to suggest an edit bottom
    for the original post ..
    Or am I missing it? Thanks.
    Updated February 25th, 2018 at 04:00 PM by TuesdayEve
  7. H.Brown's Avatar
    I like your writing, it is an honest look at the world that sits around you. I also like to write in simple terms, rather than flowery language in my poems. You draw the reader in and paint the world as you see it. It has a lovely flow and it even rhymes. A wonderful read Tuesday, keep 'em coming.
  8. TuesdayEve's Avatar
    Thanks ROP,
    Glad you liked it....Adele and I were hoping
    others would like it as well, and relate to it...
    I started blogging, new concept for me,
    just to get the words out. The poems are
    raw with very minor changes from the
    originals in an effort to use everyday
    language and not beheld to a higher poetic
    standard or critique. Thanks again
  9. H.Brown's Avatar
    I like the imagery you compose in this short poem. Reminds me of waking up in summer. Thanks Tuesday.
  10. RhythmOvPain's Avatar
    I can't even critique this because I simply like it.

    Nice sentiment.
  11. kaminoshiyo's Avatar
    And I thought Friday was the best

    Nice poem.
  12. H.Brown's Avatar
    I really enjoyed it.
  13. TuesdayEve's Avatar
    Thanks HB & jen,
    That was one of my earlier poems from last
    summer. It was an ‘ah-ha!’ moment.
  14. jenthepen's Avatar
    What a lovely expression of a beautiful truth - positive thoughts produce positive energy and positive energy nurtures a healthy world. I love it.
  15. H.Brown's Avatar
    Beautiful, Tuesday.
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