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  1. Daviwolf's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Plasticweld
    Sounds like a bad dream, interesting story though. The narrative comes a cross kind of choppy and forced. While the story moves right along somehow that personal touch is missing, while there are tons of details they are flat in there description and it is hard to pick up on the intensity, which I am sure you meant to share..

    Thanks for sharing your work...Bob
    Thank you for taking the time to read my work and responding. I hope that during the years I spend writing this book, I can get past my forced style of writing and add a better personal touch. Stick around though and continue reading and I will take you away from the bad dream and into a world of Adventure
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  3. Daviwolf's Avatar
    Preciate the apply, I will try and fix that in the later chapters
  4. Plasticweld's Avatar
    Sounds like a bad dream, interesting story though. The narrative comes a cross kind of choppy and forced. While the story moves right along somehow that personal touch is missing, while there are tons of details they are flat in there description and it is hard to pick up on the intensity, which I am sure you meant to share..

    Thanks for sharing your work...Bob
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