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Uncle Sam's Harvest (Free Verse)

This was submitted as my first Pip Challenge! I can feel so much warmth from my brain. It's as fresh as a homemade sheet of cookies from grandma's oven.

I am looking forward to hearing the critics! I am stoked to see the growth of my writing. Enjoy!

PrinzeCharming;1950976 said:
Form: Free Verse

Uncle Sam's Harvest

Beautifully seasoned fallow land,
God's gift to cultivate passion.
A man's hoe faces a challenge,
for the depths of its prosperity.

Sown the seeds of innocence,
nestled in the fertility of perseverance.
Joyful tears aid the thriving species,
trailing against the radiant warmth of a florist's touch.

Caress the stalk, embrace the fruit,
commodities of commitment in abundance.
Nurturing society's prospective generation of commerce,
lies in the open minds of those who follow.

Primitive agricultural instinct sparks,
an innate desire for heredity survival.
No biologist required for the ultimate sacrifice,
the fusion of two cells to replenish the defective seeds.

Comments

Prinze,

Great to have a new competitor! I'm not a strong poet myself, but the format of the Purple Pip is good for all levels. I should have my own entry in later today.

I'm no expert on free verse, but your poem looks good to me! 8)

HC
 
HarperCole;bt5090 said:
Prinze,

Great to have a new competitor! I'm not a strong poet myself, but the format of the Purple Pip is good for all levels. I should have my own entry in later today.

I'm no expert on free verse, but your poem looks good to me! 8)

HC

Haha, thank you! I appreciate your support. Good luck!
 

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