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The Mad and Deluded Writings of a Sleepy Poet

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Hooray hurrah hooray a new beastie poem is here to stay

Beasties Sings Those Songs
of Wicked Things

On tattered wings we floats and flies,
high, high, up in stormy skies
we sings of heaven’s pearly things
as we brings our bows and slings

on ocean clouds we skims and drifts
flopping and flapping on our backs
paddling our wings on vaporous strings
as we adapts to heavens traps

Bewares! Bewares! Of the Knights of Lights
they bites and they fights with spiked fangs and pikes
no mercies will they shows as they nibbles and gnaws at our toes
while stinking the air with thier holy farts and ripping out our blackish hearts

never, never, will we beasties retreats
or allows and accepts any types of defeats

beastie, beastie
time to feastie
eat, eat, eat,
and savor
that sweet and succulent


Really like this. One nit, "...spiked fangs and spikes..."
perhaps "...spiked fangs and pikes..." ???
Great poem, really liked meter and rhyme, what rhythm!
PADDLING OUR WINGS ON VAPOROUS STRINGS: Classic rcallaci! Scalding and scathing... unchained and uncensored... from fabulous to sublime---such devilish rhyme... One more poem to add to my private collection... Love this, Maestro .... Thank you... write on.... Grasshopper
Thank for the read- my beasties are quite happy with your comments-thanks you verys much mr hal for the pikes-our idiot creator can be such a wordfool..We have directed him to make that change...

the beasties and bob

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