This is irking the hell out of me.
Most of the people I liked when I joined are gone.
What the fuck even happened to Plasticweld? Why was he banned?
This isn't half the song yet, and it's going to be at least 7 minutes long before it's done with extremely long lyrics.
This is what I have composed so far, and the lyrics are included below.
The final passage before the transition will be a repeat of the fast section, which I have determined is more dynamically sound. The lyrics reflect this. I have also included a hardcore punk rap which will go after this for added critique if possible.
KILL IT WITH FIRE
I GOT A TORCH
I GOT SOME GAS
LIGHT SOME SHIT UP
TURN IT TO ASH
I'm gonna kill you all
I'm gonna burn this shit down
There's nowhere you can hide
My fire never dies
I've risen above the wreckage of what is left of humanity;
I know the final answer now, I've seen the truth; the golden key -
the crimson flame, the scalding wave, my pounding heart; (CONFLAGRATION)
fear death no more, the pain is gone, let fire take me; (IMMOLATION)
Ignition burns; the friction turns the planet earth; the black smoke rises
on the wind; purge wordly sin - it exists no more in this suffocating silence
Earth to earth; ashes to ashes; dust to dust; (RESTITUTION)
Ashes in your mouth; ashes in your eyes; ashes up your ass; (ABSOLUTION)
I don't know what the fuck I got to do
to get it through to you; I'm sick and fucking tired of all the shit you've put me through, and I really hope the last thing i get to smell is the stench of your rotting corpse before the flames engulf me to my death
I'm going to add a lot of transitions after this, and I expect the song to be well around 7 minutes long before I finish writing it.
I don't expect a single goddamn word of criticism or an answer to my previous question, but whatever.