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Community of the Living Dead (full demo w/ lyrics)


Community of the Living Dead

[Intro]
HATRED
LIES
COMMUNION
THE DAMNED GATHER NOW

THEIR KINGDOM
UNITED
EMPOWERED

RITUAL
SACRIFICE
DEATH
THE NEW AGE BEGINS

THE END OF ALL TIME
COMMENCEMENT

[Bridge and Verse]
Nobility in the eyes of the Antichrist
Seek out approval from their demonic prince
Sacrificing human life to acknowledge him
With heinous ritualistic murders in mind

Secrets to eternal life held within
Ancient texts of mortal sin read aloud
When the knife is thrusted in the heart is pulled
The spell is cast and the ritual ends

[Bridge and Solo]

[Verse]
Human life has no true worth in his presence
Even those who worship him are but his humble servants
Those for whom he has no need shall require death
By his law whom he destest shall quake

Blood is cast unto the soil in his name
Into his cup the nectar flows ingested for him
To the pigs go the remains as worthless scraps
His servants rejoice as the spoils are retained

[Bridge]

[SOLO]

[Bridge and Verse]
Darkest times of mortal man; usurping daylight
Satan lifts his loathsome hand and casts his shadow
Centralize and take command; the puppets follow
He who holds the might of Lucifer's throne

Death befalls the righteous soul; only hell awaits you
God's forsaken his control; your life is lost forever
Bathed in blood, you'll dance alone into a lake of fire
THE RITUAL IS DONE NOW BEHOLD MY EMPIRE

[Spoken]
Under his name they gather
To death they worship in sin
Secretly waving his banner
Satan is their only king

His glory the ends of their service
By killing they satisfy his means
Together they stand as his subjects
The Community of the Living Dead

[Bridge Solo End]

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I am so fucking happy with how this song turned out.

After determining the devil's triad is the perfect method of conveying the final verse of the song, I decided to pay homage to Sabbath and cover the main riff from their eponymous song.

IT'S SO FUCKING INTENSE.

Comments

I wasn't going to comment again; but I actually liked this quite a bit. Reminded me of In the Sign of Evil...I think that's about the highest compliment I can give it. Now if only you had some really awful 80s-German production, pounding jungle-drums, bass thick as blood, and would bother to miss your notes every now and then, this would be literally perfect.

Death befalls the righeous soul; only hell awaits you
God's forsaken his control; your life is lost forever
This is a lie from the Devil though :D
and you misspelled righteous
 
BornForBurning;bt15470 said:
I wasn't going to comment again; but I actually liked this quite a bit. Reminded me of In the Sign of Evil...I think that's about the highest compliment I can give it. Now if only you had some really awful 80s-German production, pounding jungle-drums, bass thick as blood, and would bother to miss your notes every now and then, this would be literally perfect.


This is a lie from the Devil though :D
and you misspelled righteous

I really appreciate you listening and giving me these critiques. Thank you for your consideration.
 

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