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Adjustments Made to LRWG # 08

After reviewing and contemplating the previous draft of the piece, I opted to drop the portion where Digger retreats to a tunnel. I did this primarily because it conflicts with his previous action of shuffling away (leaving the scene) to tell Doctor Gallaine that Lynn would be staying in the chamber. After removing his retreat to the tunnel, I polished the piece to adjust for the change and it flows much better.

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