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Tettsuo
October 14th, 2020, 07:15 PM
TITLE - Heaven's Spear
GENRE - Fantasy
WORD COUNT - 97,000
BLURB - A former slave girl, turned warrior, must find the courage to face her own lies to see herself becoming the enemy she been seeking to destroy.
SENSITIVE CONTENT - Yes: sexual abuse of a minor
AUDIENCE DESCRIPTION - 17+
EXPECTATIONS - I'm curious about readability, flow and high level analysis of story content. I'm not interested in a proofread as much as I'm interested in reader enjoyment.
TIMESCALE - Since I'll be querying this, I'd like responses to be as the reader's earliest convenience.
AVAILABLE FORMATS - Any electronic format the readers would like. I also have a copy on Google docs. Access to that is also available

Greyson
October 14th, 2020, 07:49 PM
I'm interested in the premise for sure, but I can't promise a quick turn around on my part. I'd be more than happy to offer my services if a little delay isn't a turn off for you in this instance.

Tettsuo
October 14th, 2020, 08:52 PM
Private message sent :)

epimetheus
October 15th, 2020, 11:25 AM
Interested, but also can't offer a quick turnaround time.

bdcharles
October 15th, 2020, 01:29 PM
One question to you, Tettsuo, would be: how edited is this, how drafted? Have you done all you can in terms of rewrites and fixes, including updates since you workshopped this one in Aug?

Tettsuo
October 15th, 2020, 03:10 PM
One question to you, Tettsuo, would be: how edited is this, how drafted? Have you done all you can in terms of rewrites and fixes, including updates since you workshopped this one in Aug?
I've been working on getting this in the best shape possible since then.

Samanmoran
October 23rd, 2020, 06:46 PM
HI, I'm interested in reading your book. It sounds like the kind of work I'm drawn to reading.
It will be my first beta read, but I believe I can offer you some good feedback. I read on average a novel a week, so I could probably get remarks back to you in about 2-3 weeks allowing for unforeseen time suck.

Tettsuo
October 24th, 2020, 05:20 PM
HI, I'm interested in reading your book. It sounds like the kind of work I'm drawn to reading.
It will be my first beta read, but I believe I can offer you some good feedback. I read on average a novel a week, so I could probably get remarks back to you in about 2-3 weeks allowing for unforeseen time suck.
Is there a particular electronic format you prefer?