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June 4th, 2020, 05:56 AM
So, I'm rewriting a story where a pianist learns with the great composers. At chapter 4, it starts to take a dramatic turn for Mozart. Beethoven hears the news of Mozart being in the hospital and runs towards Mozart, only to realize he has to tell Haydn about it and turns on a dime. One thing I'm having a bit of a problem with is that different characters address Mozart in my story differently. The doctors address him as Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart at first and then as Wolfgang Amadeus afterwards, Haydn calls him Amadeus, Lydia, the young pianist, calls him Mozart, and Anna Maria and Leopold, his parents, often address him as either Wolfgang or Wolfgang Amadeus. That's 5 different ways that the same character is being addressed. I'm worried that with 5 ways of addressing the same character, the reader will be confused.
Now, you might think that these 5 ways of addressing the character won't be confusing because it is Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart. But, I think there is a significant number of people that don't know that the W.A. in W.A. Mozart stands for Wolfgang Amadeus. And even if there isn't, that doesn't mean that there hasn't been a different person with Wolfgang Amadeus in the name that isn't related to arguably the most well known of the composers, but is still known of for some other reason.
Here are examples of the different ways my Mozart character is addressed with who is talking to him or about him next to the part in quotation marks:
“Well if it isn't my famous Wolfgang. And who is this little girl with you?” - Anna Maria
“Mozart, are you okay? You don't look well.” - Lydia
“Son, you call yourself Wolfgang Amadeus all the time. Sometimes, when you are being humorous, you just call yourself Amadeus. It isn't often that I hear you say your full name of Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart. I have even heard of some people that admire you changing their name so that it has Amadeus in it, because of you.” - Leopold
“Where is Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart? Haydn and I want to see him. I would never abandon an ill friend, especially one as famous as Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart.” - Beethoven
“Believe me Ludwig, I know. But your Scherzi are dramatic. This one is humorous and should cheer Amadeus right up.” - Haydn
You see why I'm wondering about how to prevent confusion amongst the readers? So, how can I prevent confusion amongst the readers while still keeping the multiple ways that my Mozart character is being addressed? Or will it not be that confusing, despite 5 ways of the same character being addressed?
Now, you might think that these 5 ways of addressing the character won't be confusing because it is Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart. But, I think there is a significant number of people that don't know that the W.A. in W.A. Mozart stands for Wolfgang Amadeus. And even if there isn't, that doesn't mean that there hasn't been a different person with Wolfgang Amadeus in the name that isn't related to arguably the most well known of the composers, but is still known of for some other reason.
Here are examples of the different ways my Mozart character is addressed with who is talking to him or about him next to the part in quotation marks:
“Well if it isn't my famous Wolfgang. And who is this little girl with you?” - Anna Maria
“Mozart, are you okay? You don't look well.” - Lydia
“Son, you call yourself Wolfgang Amadeus all the time. Sometimes, when you are being humorous, you just call yourself Amadeus. It isn't often that I hear you say your full name of Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart. I have even heard of some people that admire you changing their name so that it has Amadeus in it, because of you.” - Leopold
“Where is Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart? Haydn and I want to see him. I would never abandon an ill friend, especially one as famous as Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart.” - Beethoven
“Believe me Ludwig, I know. But your Scherzi are dramatic. This one is humorous and should cheer Amadeus right up.” - Haydn
You see why I'm wondering about how to prevent confusion amongst the readers? So, how can I prevent confusion amongst the readers while still keeping the multiple ways that my Mozart character is being addressed? Or will it not be that confusing, despite 5 ways of the same character being addressed?