Theglasshouse
May 13th, 2020, 08:13 PM
Is it the character losing something already that is considered to be lost in the opening of the story that causes the change? Thus we feel the character is in trouble.
For example, a person loses their health, and loses their job. They could want many things. For example, maybe they had a passion they have to give up. As for the other parts of the story it can be ignored for this discussion. He wants not to lose his house.
What would a good internal conflict look like? He's afraid of losing his dreams and other people's dreams. He is divorced, and his family's son wants to paint art for a living, just an example. (fear supposedly is good for writing a story from scratch).
Hamlet loses his sanity and his father. But is really sane. He sees a ghost, that prompts him on a journey to revenge for instance.
When we lose something in many cases I have assumed rightly or wrongly that it becomes part of the goal. What does the character want after losing something? Or does the goal happen after the event? When a character decides to do something.
So in my example maybe the father makes the son's dream at studying something expensive and wants him to have a job. Artistic expression is discouraged. He can't be sentimental about things.
Goal is usually defined with these words:
A character wants something badly but has a hard time getting it.
For example, a person loses their health, and loses their job. They could want many things. For example, maybe they had a passion they have to give up. As for the other parts of the story it can be ignored for this discussion. He wants not to lose his house.
What would a good internal conflict look like? He's afraid of losing his dreams and other people's dreams. He is divorced, and his family's son wants to paint art for a living, just an example. (fear supposedly is good for writing a story from scratch).
Hamlet loses his sanity and his father. But is really sane. He sees a ghost, that prompts him on a journey to revenge for instance.
When we lose something in many cases I have assumed rightly or wrongly that it becomes part of the goal. What does the character want after losing something? Or does the goal happen after the event? When a character decides to do something.
So in my example maybe the father makes the son's dream at studying something expensive and wants him to have a job. Artistic expression is discouraged. He can't be sentimental about things.
Goal is usually defined with these words:
A character wants something badly but has a hard time getting it.