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Kist
August 13th, 2019, 05:30 PM
Would anyone mind reading my short script? I wrote it the other day, and I just want to know if it's okay. It's a comedy about a demonic possession. I might film it with friends and post it online for fun.

Darren White
August 13th, 2019, 05:34 PM
Welcome to our forums :)

For the Beta Readers forum we have a few guidelines. Please read them.
Here are the guidelines for readers requests:
https://www.writingforums.com/threads/178338-READ-THIS-FIRST-BETA-READER-REQUESTS

Kist
August 13th, 2019, 05:45 PM
TITLE: Untitled
GENRE: Comedy
WORD COUNT: 3089
BLURB: Young man must stop demon from ending the world.
AUDIENCE DESCRIPTION: 20s-30s and possibly older if you don't mind immature characters.
EXPECTATIONS (Explain the type of feedback you required and the mechanism that will be used to gather it, such as use of on-line forms, questionnaires with MSS, etc.)
TIMESCALE: A week or sooner preferably
AVAILABLE FORMATS: PDF file or I can upload it to google docs if preferred
OTHER INFORMATION: It's about demonic possession, but it's still pretty light.

Kist
August 13th, 2019, 10:27 PM
Welcome to our forums :)

For the Beta Readers forum we have a few guidelines. Please read them.
Here are the guidelines for readers requests:
https://www.writingforums.com/threads/178338-READ-THIS-FIRST-BETA-READER-REQUESTS

I replied with the info you requested, but the comment hasn't been moderated.

Darren White
August 14th, 2019, 08:29 AM
Yeah, I noticed. Posts in this forum are automatically put in moderation. I do my best to be online as much as possible to approve them, here it is :)

Aquilo
August 14th, 2019, 11:10 AM
Kist, you might find that by reading and commenting on other authors' stories that you'll get more beta interest here. I know beta work takes time out of a busy schedule, but by taking time and care with other members work, other authors wlll do the same with you. :)

Fatclub
August 14th, 2019, 03:26 PM
At 3K words, it won't take long. Pm it to me and I'll give my thruppence-worth. Sounds like it could be fun! Give me a couple of days, though.

Kist
August 14th, 2019, 08:43 PM
At 3K words, it won't take long. Pm it to me and I'll give my thruppence-worth. Sounds like it could be fun! Give me a couple of days, though.

Excellent! It's mostly dialogue, so it should be an easy read. I've uploaded it to my google drive. I'll PM you the link. :-)

Princesisto
September 13th, 2019, 02:27 PM
If you still need another Beta reader, I could look at your script.

But will you comment on my short story? (6,000 words)

If so, we can do an e-mail exchange.