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hypocritter
May 28th, 2015, 07:50 PM
Pin cushions for the mozzies
In that awful hotel room
No lightbulb,dampness in the bed
I'm not a damned mushroom

I must report on yelp
Leave a bad review
Save others from this fate
There's nowt else much to do

My rooms already been reviewed
The same time I was there
'The guests taste great a five star treet'
Signed by the mozzie Claire

JellyTrigger
June 5th, 2015, 02:11 AM
Pin cushions for the mozzies
In that awful hotel room
No lightbulb,dampness in the bed
I'm not a damned mushroom

I must report on yelp
Leave a bad review
Save others from this fate
There's nowt else much to do

My rooms already been reviewed
The same time I was there
'The guests taste great a five star treet'
Signed by the mozzie Claire

Dear hypocritter,

I thought your poem was humorous and inventive. I've also been a victim of an awful hotel room. They can really drive you nuts! I haven't dipped into poems much. I've only written one about the same size as your own, but nonetheless I enjoyed this one.

Anyway, looking forward to any of your future work.

Sincerely,
Christian Rodriguez
The Newbie Writer

hypocritter
June 5th, 2015, 06:02 PM
Thanks for the feed back Christian. Look forward to see you on the poetry threads. 😀