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CJ Tomlinson
April 19th, 2015, 04:53 PM
"You know when you're explaining something to someone, and they're listening and looking at you intensely and they have this expression, and you just know, you can almost see their mind loading and buffering, and then all of a sudden BAM!"

The ice pick went in smoother than Max expected.

"A sudden realization!" He smiled at his listener, his friend, his most hated enemy.

As the traitor dropped to the floor, Max smiled widely.

"God, I love being meta!"

escorial
April 19th, 2015, 04:58 PM
hard hitting piece man

Paladin
April 27th, 2015, 06:21 PM
Very sinister.