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InnerFlame00
November 20th, 2014, 06:53 AM
This is just something I challenged myself to write - a snippit of writing trying to describe a short scene in such a way that the reader can feel they are there. Did I succeed? (I'd love to see other people try this challenge but not sure if I'm allowed to post challenges?).

EmmaSohan
November 21st, 2014, 02:04 AM
Succeed. I did get caught on dusty light.

Clinking Thearly
November 21st, 2014, 06:04 AM
You succeeded :champagne:the simplicity of just her, her cat and the sun made it easy to get a clear picture in my head, at least. I'd be happy to take the challenge once I get more involved with the forum.