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Fivetide
September 10th, 2014, 08:52 PM
The boss was right goddamit …Nooooo!
He pointed at the white paper in front of her, “it says, time and travel expenses”.
She crumpled on the desk sobbing, a fist beating on a pile of invoices. Her dreams of world domination crushed, along with the 6-way with boyzone before they became wrinkled.

Kieran S
September 15th, 2014, 02:23 PM
A pedantic, minor point: there are only four members of Boyzone still alive, so her dream would have to involve a 5-way, not a 6-way.

Stephen Gatley died in 2009: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Stephen_Gately

Also, maybe "...time and time-travel expenses" could give you more scope to continue?

Just a suggestion...