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Firemajic
August 27th, 2014, 10:35 PM
I fell madly in love with Ethan's poem "The Invisible" in the poetry challange. He brought to life such a sad and intriguing person I instantly wanted to know more about. Ethan put just enough tiny details in his poem, that gave the reader a wealth of information about the Invivible ...standing at the edge of the crowd,watching, wanting [I think] to be a part of it all, that added to the solitary feeling. The the subtle nuances, watching TV in his small apt, the feeling of despair was brutal. Thank you Ethan for a powerful read.