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heir_of_isildur0
August 17th, 2014, 10:17 PM
This is a continuation of a book found here (http://www.writingforums.com/threads/149812-Zynthos-Chapters-1-3-Revised-(11-341-word-count)-PG13)

Feedback that would be nice:
-What you think of the story
-Character dialogue
-Questions about plot points
-Confusing paragraphs

Again thank you for taking time to read this!


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Chapters 7-9 will be posted tomorrow.