heir_of_isildur0
August 17th, 2014, 10:17 PM
This is a continuation of a book found here (http://www.writingforums.com/threads/149812-Zynthos-Chapters-1-3-Revised-(11-341-word-count)-PG13)
Feedback that would be nice:
-What you think of the story
-Character dialogue
-Questions about plot points
-Confusing paragraphs
Again thank you for taking time to read this!
6289
Chapters 7-9 will be posted tomorrow.
Feedback that would be nice:
-What you think of the story
-Character dialogue
-Questions about plot points
-Confusing paragraphs
Again thank you for taking time to read this!
6289
Chapters 7-9 will be posted tomorrow.