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heir_of_isildur0
August 17th, 2014, 09:57 PM
So I haven't posted anything in 2 years but I remembered I had chapters 1-5 on this site and am now a lot farther. I would like some feedback on what I have. I'll be posting in 3 chapter blocks so that I don't monopolize the forum. The changes in these first few chapters may be minor compared to other story changes.
Feedback that would be nice:
-What you think of the story
-Character dialogue
-Questions about plot points
-Confusing paragraphs

I really appreciate anyone taking the time to actually read this. Sometimes it can be frustrating because I don't have people to talk to about it.
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(The reason I attached a PDF instead of pasting is because of formatting issues with the forum by the way)