View Full Version : Short Story: Tribute ADULT THEMES, NAUGHTY LANGUAGE, 4000k words.

Daniel Loreand
August 17th, 2014, 03:53 AM
How's it goin n' that. Thought I'd post my short story up for some feedback. I know my grammar is terrible, it's a work in progress. When I say work in progress I mean from when I started to learn how to write in school all the way up to now, up hill struggle to be honest. . anyway getting side tracked. A review of sorts would be ideal, if you can get through it - sorry about the length. . of the story that is. Don't worry about being harsh on feedback, I can take it. Honestly thank you though to anyone who takes the time to read and reply. Thanks guys.