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illiteratewriter
April 13th, 2014, 12:51 AM
blah this sucked

PiP
April 14th, 2014, 12:19 AM
DOUG
God damn how long is take gonna
take!

BECCA
You have no patience at all! (you've)?
Where inheriting an art gallery,
not sitting at a drive through!

DOUG
Whatever, you know I hate this
guy.


BECCA
Dude, you hate everyone what
else is new. I do agree with you
on this one though, Always got a
rapeish vibe off him when we were ?
younger.

DOUG
I never got that from him and
no I don't hate everyone, I just
think most people are useless and
stupid!


BECCA
Oh yeah huge difference Jesus,
I cant imagine why you're still
single.


DOUG
Wow, okay, this coming from you.




BECCA
Oh whatever, I'm gay its totally
different.


DOUG
Thats such a cop out and you know
it!


The office door opens and Robert enters, a well dressed man in his 50s carrying a briefcase.

ROBERT
Well hello there Douglas,
Rebecca, how have you been?
You know I didn't see you guys
at your grandmothers funeral.


Robert takes a seat at his desk opening up the briefcase.

DOUG
I stopped by


ROBERT
Stopped by huh, okay


DOUG
You know what how about you
just tell us why were here.
Because after today we don't
have to see you anymore!


ROBERT
Oh I know I'm just as excited
as you, if you only knew just
how much Ive had to put up with
because of your family! (MORE)


Robert leans back reflecting with a smile on his face





ROBERT (CONT)
You know though though, none
of that matters anymore because
I am finally free of it as soon
as you sign this.


Robert slides a small stack of papers towards Doug and Becca

Hiya, I had a VERY quick look and you still have a few errors. They're easy to fix so I've highlighted the words in red to give you an idea. I've not made the corrections because you'll see exactly what I mean. :)

P.S. I've not caught all of them...

PiP

illiteratewriter
April 16th, 2014, 11:27 PM
Hiya, I had a VERY quick look and you still have a few errors. They're easy to fix so I've highlighted the words in red to give you an idea. I've not made the corrections because you'll see exactly what I mean. :)

P.S. I've not caught all of them...

PiP

Thanks, Ive been really bussy and didnt really have a chance to do a very good pass over to fix everything yet. I thought I had but I must not have, or not saved it posibbly, either way im going to go through it now and get everything cleaned up. Ill re-post it in place of the original post and mark it as revised, and again my fault on that. I have so many files I might have just lost the version I had cleaned up.