View Full Version : Saved By The Bell (11k word count)

March 7th, 2014, 06:39 AM
I am about ready to self publish this piece. I have revised it multiple times. I want a readers response, and of course, let me know of any little errors found. If you attempt to read the story, and find you can't finish it. please let me know as well. And let me know why so I can learn to improve my story telling abilities.

Any of you who critique this story, please PM me when you have your own story up so I can return the favour and critique yours.

I am having a real tough time formatting this story in the text editor. If you would be interested in critiquing it for me, please let me know and I'll send it to you in rtf to your PM box or email. Whichever one works.


March 7th, 2014, 04:20 PM
Can you post it here? It is important for all to see in the forum so that we can learn from other people's corrections.

March 7th, 2014, 06:46 PM
Would this violate first publishing rights? I am also worried about that.

March 7th, 2014, 08:02 PM
Never heard of that. Is it a copyright law? Send a link if you find such a law. Everyone seems to not worry about such things though.

March 7th, 2014, 10:17 PM
Actually to solve this problem, and I just recently discovered this today, writingforum has a special writingforum member's only forum for posting work on the board without violating first rights because they don't allow the general public to search or view that forum. Just check the "Members Only" and if your writing stories, check the Prose Workshop.

They created it for that very reason. I didn't find out until today. I have the first 2000 words posted there of my Saved By The Bell story.

March 8th, 2014, 04:58 AM
Your right. This sums it up. http://www.thenextbigwriter.com/writing_resources/first_rights.html