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Douglas
February 19th, 2014, 04:29 AM
Not sure if other writers do this kind of thing but it helps inspire me whilst writing.

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Skodt
February 20th, 2014, 04:41 PM
The button on his head stands out to much. It doesn't look like it is on his head, rather looks pasted over the picture of his head. Blending it would have a better effect on the edges I suppose. Not really a big deal if it is just for guidance.

The Tourist
February 20th, 2014, 04:47 PM
Got to tell you, as a combat shooter for 40 years, I hope all my attackers use make-up like this.

As a writer, yeah, I find it distracting and over-the-top. Does the use of this chakra play an important part in the plot?

Edit: I will admit, the device was used successfully on "Stargate SG-1."