View Full Version : Cormic McQuic

April 26th, 2012, 11:56 AM
This is my first shot at a short story and this is the second draft. Feedback welcomed and appreciated. I'm working on trying to build suspense, so please let me know how it worked for you or where if fell short. As always thanks guys/gals!

- Camden

April 26th, 2012, 09:53 PM
Um...did you take it back to the editing table or did you accidently not post it?? Me confused.

April 26th, 2012, 10:02 PM
I took it down.