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Taknovrthewrld
April 23rd, 2012, 05:45 AM
My new writing exercise is to pick a word that I like or want to add to my vocabulary and write a 250+ word shortie including the word. This is the first piece, Vestigial. (btw if you like this drop a hello in my blog, I love support and there will be more entries coming soon)


Vestigial

I walked along the path through the park. Many of the trees had fallen, some of which now obstructed the way. The larger trees had smashed the brick where they had fallen. Those you had to climb over to continue, which I did with only a slight bit of childish amusement. My wounds had healed enough to allow me freer movement. The path led me to the park playground and I saw the statue.

The statue of the City Commissioner had been raised in honor of his most recent reelection, the fifth consecutive successful campaign. A plaque at the base of the statue was inscribed with the words, “Barry Sarlowit, City Commissioner,” followed by his campaign slogan, “A hands on thinker for the city and the people.” He was meant to be immortalized in an ever modest bow to the city. I did not feel bad for smiling at what I saw.

On it’s way to the ground a surprisingly exacting tree had smashed into the statue, crushing the head and both of the arms up to the elbow in a blunt force, guillotine-style execution blow. The severed parts had collected at the statues feet, nothing but rubble and dust.

A breeze blew a scattering of leaves into the air in a spiral. In my giddiness I mused that it was the vestigial wind of the tornado lingering until the last bit of excitement had left the town. I imagined that it heard me laughing, scoffing back to me, “Is that funny to you? I found it amusing myself…” The wind dropped the leaves. They flipped and floated to the ground.

Potty
April 23rd, 2012, 05:49 AM
I thought vestigial had something to do with virgins?

Taknovrthewrld
April 23rd, 2012, 05:56 AM
Maybe, but I'm going off of Microsoft Word Dictionary, specifically the first definition:

vesˇtigˇiˇal [ve stíjjee əl]
adj
1. being trace: remaining after nearly all the rest has disappeared or dwindled
a vestigial stirring of passion

2. no longer functional: having become degenerate or functionless in the course of time
the vestigial muscles of the ear

Potty
April 23rd, 2012, 06:00 AM
a vestigial stirring of passion, having become functionless in the course of time...

Sounds like a virgin to me.

Nice little story too! Easy to read.

Taknovrthewrld
April 23rd, 2012, 06:06 AM
Sounds like a virgin to me.

Nice little story too! Easy to read.

I see the connection you are making. Thank you, I am sincerely flattered.

Potty
April 23rd, 2012, 06:16 AM
I see the connection you are making.



Sorry, I think I'm funnier than I am! What is your next word choice?

Taknovrthewrld
April 23rd, 2012, 06:38 AM
Sorry, I think I'm funnier than I am! What is your next word choice?

I'm so happy with the first try that I haven't even thought of doing another yet. I suppose tomorrow I'll try to bang one out. I wrote down the word 'excogitate' which means to think out or devise. I'd like to use that.