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Matthew92
January 19th, 2011, 12:52 AM
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InsanityStrickenWriter
January 19th, 2011, 06:39 PM
It's quite a poetic story, and I'm surprised it hasn't recieved any comments yet. I liked it, great work.

Matthew92
January 20th, 2011, 01:16 AM
That was really refreshing. Thank you.

Gumby
January 20th, 2011, 01:32 AM
I enjoyed reading this, and I must ask about the title. Does each paragraph correlate with the words of the title?

Matthew92
January 20th, 2011, 02:06 AM
I enjoyed reading this, and I must ask about the title. Does each paragraph correlate with the words of the title?

In a sense. The whole thing, really: A boy wakes up, delusional, in wretched pain, his wrists tied together by rope. He is lying on hard dirt, with the intense brightness of the sun burning in his eyes. He hallucinates a bit, and then dies.