View Full Version : Please review and comment on my new short story

November 6th, 2010, 09:57 PM
Hi there,

This is Pongy from Snowland. I've been walking and writing, I saw a nymph by the pond, I stole the heart from a nurse in WWII... So please review and comment on this new short story.

Kind regards


URL: http://goo.gl/6tvJw | http://www.aoioe.tk (http://www.aoioe.tk/)


Moon shining, I saw her by the drawer, picked up the gun. Resistance to Zenith programming with the lard and butter, gracefully sweeping through the attic.

MJ Preston
November 6th, 2010, 11:53 PM
I tried your links. No luck, you might want to post here.

November 7th, 2010, 02:12 AM
yea just copy paste it here. i can't get your links to work.