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Gumby
July 21st, 2010, 04:00 PM
removed

SilverMoon
July 22nd, 2010, 11:56 PM
Gumby, I think of Nero watching the flames from a blacony while singing a song about the destruction of Troy.


We hear the tune you play
familiar-
an old song


Great imagery!

plucked with fingers
manicured-
no calluses..


Just enough of a bite!

Maybe that's why
you can't hold
a true note.

Compact and thourougly enjoyed. Laurie

Gumby
July 23rd, 2010, 12:07 AM
Thankyou Laurie, it's an old one that I dug up and blew the dust off of. :)

SilverMoon
July 23rd, 2010, 12:11 AM
Glad you brought it back to life!

un named
July 23rd, 2010, 08:12 PM
I like this poem a lot. The end, that surprised me. and the middle which has great imagery.

Chesters Daughter
July 23rd, 2010, 09:13 PM
It is such a pleasure to read this little gem again. The hint of things to come, possibly sooner than we anticipate, still makes my hackles rise. Good old Revelations. A delicious and well deserved jab at one who should be wearing a bullseye to make these things easier.:wink: I doubt I will ever cease to appreciate your boundless wit, Cindy, please keep it coming.