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MaggieG
June 8th, 2010, 10:01 AM
She looks into these scribblings.
" You are a woman now. "
coagulates, school marker red
on ledger paper white.
Pouring, she folds up
her love letter from God,
throwing it away.
Because humanity has taught her,
it's not lady-like to pass notes
to the rest of the class.

Gumby
June 8th, 2010, 01:56 PM
Ah, every woman remembers that day. :) Love it!

Eden.Kaye
June 8th, 2010, 05:06 PM
Yes, every woman does remember that day. I like the way you write Maggie. It is deep and makes people (at least me) think about it and reread it and enjoy it.
Well written!

MaggieG
June 10th, 2010, 02:24 AM
Ah, every woman remembers that day. :) Love it!

Gumby

I wrote this for a teacher of my daughter who thought she needed to tell the girls in her class that this was not "suitable" conversation.

God ! I was ****ed ! LOL

I sent it to her in a red envelope ! LOL

Even my Army Sgt. of a father had no problem discussing this subject with me. ( Now THAT was one hell of a conversation ! )

Thank you much Hun :)

MaggieG
June 10th, 2010, 02:26 AM
Yes, every woman does remember that day. I like the way you write Maggie. It is deep and makes people (at least me) think about it and reread it and enjoy it.
Well written!

Awww Thank you Babydoll :) I have been doing this for 30 plus years, and I am still a hack ! But I work very hard at being a good hack ;)