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- Part of a (hopefully) Bigger Work (Language)
- Hopeful, Romantic
- The Best Thing (language)
- H.E.A.E.I.B. Chapter 9: The new student
- Dk-421
- Orbit - Language Warning
- 'That Day'
- The Story of Samuel (the begining of a shorty story...or maybe something more)
- Adventures in Whoreland (not sexual)( Language Warning)
- Bone To Pick (Language Warning)
- The Boxing Match
- These Words to Me
- Bleeding Time
- Tides
- Chapter Two: The Orchid (Language warning)
- Undead Chapter One (Language Warning)
- Untitled WIP Excerpt: looking for a little feedback.
- Um...Feedback?
- My Classmate's A Dragon?!
- My first story
- Island of Wonders and Mystery
- Rubble (860 Words)
- Brutal Honesty, Please (Disturbing Subject Matter)
- My first attempt at an action/death scene
- Cruel Justice (w/ some coarse language)
- Sandy
- Chapter One of my story (Title suggestions, anyone?) Warning: Language
- Dead and Fabulous (language)
- Falling for her kidnapper
- The Man in the Fog
- H.E.A.E.I.B. Chapter 10: The painful memory
- A short film screenplay: THE ANArCHISTS 1500 words Bad Language.
- The Dinner Party
- Makai - a few extracts from a Work in Progress
- Any opinions on this opening?
- Chapter Two of my story (Still no title!!!) Warning: Language
- Small selection from chapter five
- Horror Short Story: Language Warning
- The darkness
- Claws of Forgotten - An online epic suspense novel
- H.E.A.E.I.B. Chapter 11: Two options. be my slave or die
- I Don't Do Drugs
- Angels High Part One
- The Dream Journal
- The American Dream (assignment)
- Indian Farmers - SHORT ONLY 300 WORDS
- First chapter...First attempt
- Chapter 5 action sample
- The Wake [493 words]
- Blood on the Sand (Language Warning)
- End Rising
- Beginning of a story I'm writing. (Language warning)
- Big News in the East (work in progress)
- An Angel came calling
- My Boys- first draft, no edit
- What do you think? (WW2/Cold War novel) critisisms please.
- The Planet
- Fantasy/ Sword and Sorcery...First post here
- Disconnected (YA)
- A Fear of Silence
- The Mistress
- Surprise in store
- The Hitcher
- Long Xuyen Massacre, Vietnam; interview PFC Jenkins.
- Frozen in the Forest
- Insight
- Prelude to Oblivion
- My first novel... Currently untitled Chapter 1
- H.E.A.E.I.B. Chapter 12: The road full of death
- "Walter Pickett" - Opening Chapter (some strong language)
- The Immortal
- Dragontamers (Some Language)
- Do UK agents take unsolicited scripts?
- Goldfish
- Has decided to see if I can get any feedback.
- Bondswoman (short story)
- Undead short story
- Benny Sinder's War
- Enough! - working title. Warning: Language
- Chapter Five "Final"
- Some opinions of a first timer.
- 1st chapter of Eternal by Mockingbird please give thoughts
- There're No Pockets In Shrouds, <1K
- The Chronicles of Yewie
- The Hearts of the Elements
- My chapter one
- Rambling Thoughts -- Why does there have to be a "U" in Humor?
- Almost Heaven
- Tripoli Rising, Chapter One - Set in the background of the current uprising in Libya.
- Red Snow
- 'Pending'
- H.E.A.E.I.B. Chapter 13: Mission
- the 12 point hero's journey
- It's a Sin
- Uncle Hobart
- Fat blood will spill
- New Story!
- first 500 words of a novel
- The Empty Jar (Short Story)
- 'lights out' extract (Language Warning)
- The Break Before The Fall
- John 3:3 - (Adult Language)
- The Phoenix Project
- Yellow Roses a fairy tale
- Click. Bang.
- is this a better start to Eternal???
- M’Ginty’s Creek Wine Appreciation Society. 920 words. Warning; Sex and Racism.
- Does it have a future guys?
- Blue Destiny Prologue
- Ch.4: Starting with a childhood flashback/memory
- Blue Destiny: The Dynamic Dynasty Trilogy
- We are not a Mexican Restaurant - (Adult Language)
- I hope this is it - Eternal chap 1
- H.E.A.E.I.B. Chapter 14: The deadly fight
- Short Story set in London - Opinions please!
- "Diamonds in the Rough"- Draft
- The Dread Chronicles
- Tips On Presenting Your Story For Online Critique (For new members.)
- Triumvirate: Story Pieces and Ideas
- The Tower at Sea
- another go at Eternal 1st chap
- The Trip - As inspired by Christopher McCandless
- Lights Out - Chapter 2 (following on from 'Pending'. Language Warning/Sexual ref.)
- Few Paragraphs of my First Novel
- Excerpt from: Véradó - The Workers
- The Man in the Moon
- Nightmare Circus treatment R-Rated strong scenes of horror
- Lights Out - Chapter 3 (Language/Graphic warning)
- The Zatokai
- "Twelve Words for Posterity"
- Stalin and Khrushchev Investigate
- 'Stand, Dead Walken!' (Language)
- Excerpt from my novel.
- End Rising - Chapter 1: The Reason (Edited)
- Red: Chapters 1, 2.1 and 2.2
- "Prologue" to new story
- Love Letter to a girl...hope this works! (small amount of Language)
- A bit strange...
- An excerpt from The Life of Death (And Tim)
- Prologue of my first story
- Short Soldier letter in the Revolutionary War
- End Rising - Chapter 2: The Decision (Edited)
- The Chase and Other Imaginative Shorts
- First half of chapter 1 from my assassin prologue.
- Sorrow Inbetween the Undergrowth (Mild Language)
- A Teaser from My Novel Project
- H.E.A.E.I.B. Chapter 15: The last defenders
- Lamb (revising)
- The Opening Page...
- Meh story?
- Ember Light
- insolitus
- 'Fiend.' Opening to a story.
- An honest job application letter (Language)
- Short Story: Starlight
- Exclusive Invitation
- The Liberation of Lusido Nales [F]
- My attempt at Urban Fantasy (Language)
- Looks Like Hell
- Inner Psychology - Episode 1
- H.E.A.E.I.B. Chapter 16: Life
- Newb here posting something for review. (Adult Language)
- Teetotal No More (Adult Language)
- "Walter Pickett - chapter TWO" - some strong language.
- No Name for it yet- Young adult
- The Secret of Emerson Hall: Historical Fiction, South, Reconstruction Period, 1876
- Working title: Face of the Earth - Chapter 1(Language)
- Francis the Miner;
- Untitled
- Darkness Never Sleeps. (flash fiction)
- The Blue Pill (some Language)
- Radon: 5 page screenplay (fiction)
- Innocent (Language)
- Just the opening chapter of What the Locust Stole.
- On a Bench
- Untitled ( for now )
- Working title: Greg Stillman (Lots of bad language)
- A... Fight? Scene. (Language)
- VCU - page 87 of autobiography essay
- I Wann Kill a Dragon
- Phoenix Project, Part Two
- The Four (Some Explicit Language) (811 Words)
- Fantasy parody
- Untitled
- "Walter Pickett - CHAPTER 3" - no bad language in this one, I don't think!?
- A Room Locked Away
- Illusions
- Rose
- Jamie's Choice (Language)
- Death Dealer
- STAND chapter 1 (Language)
- my novel at least part of it
- H.E.A.E.I.B. Chapter 17: The Survival Game
- Who Cares? ~ Prologue [MAY CONTAIN SOME STRONG LANGUAGE AND HORROR/VIOLENCE]
- Ephemera( language and some adult content )
- One for the Road Language/violence/sexual innuendo
- Opportunity Knocks.
- Prologue
- Sounds of Silence: Prologue
- Prey World I - Citizen 1-564398B-278843 (Novel)
- Spoken Like A Lady(Mildly Disturbing)
- Phoenix Project, Part Three
- The Power of Love. (Mild Violence)
- How will he get back in?
- Skarten Academy Chapter 1
- Walking the picket line Unalaska Alaska
- A Wizards Duties (466wd Rough Intro - Hard Critiques Welcomed)
- A scene from a story that I might write.
- STAND Chapter 2: The Search Begins (Language)
- Courage (mild language, implied violence)
- Script Excerpt of 'The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas'
- Gaia's theory
- H.E.A.E.I.B. Chapter 18: The Survival Game 2
- In A Circle (Language)
- Long Pig Stew (Warning: Language)
- The Kings Assassin
- Short Excerpt from The Boy In The Striped Pyjamas, a Stage Adaptation (Please help!)
- Night Song
- War Hounds
- Automaton: An Introduction
- The Society
- Lancelot ( Language )
- A Thriller, Sci-Fi, Action Story... Working Title: Conquering The Hydra (Long story)
- The Man Who Could Read Minds
- Too late for entry into LM Challenge (Language)
- Apostles of a Paradigm Shift (Language) (7,912 Words)
- Excerpt from The Medici Diamonds
- Ye Olde Nameless Scary Story
- The Phoenix Project: To Continue or Not To Continue?
- A Descent (Just the beginning, let me know what you think!)
- Paranoia (Language)
- Losing It
- Peculiar (General Fiction)
- Title undecided
- The Switch (some language)
- STAND Chapter 3: Zeke Of The Twin Swords (Mild Language)
- H.E.A.E.I.B Chapter 19: The Survival Game Ends
- Untitled Opening - Historical Fiction - 600 words
- Revamped/Longer The Man Who Could Read Minds
- The Mistress in Red. (283 words) Let me know what you think.
- Smile for Death. (This is a fictional story)
- Urban Fantasy - First Chapter Revision
- Mr. Lamb [Foul Language]
- The dead cometh: A survivor's journal. (Language)
- Multiple POVs
- Lilith
- Maria (Contains violence and strong language)
- Reece Creatus (Chapters 1-2)
- Nemesis by Jessica Metaneira (some violence and adult language)
- The Red Crystal (working title. Fantasy/Young Adult)
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