im trying to find a way to find words that goes with the flow of the poem yet ryhmes, but im having a hard time. anyone got advice on this?
im trying to find a way to find words that goes with the flow of the poem yet ryhmes, but im having a hard time. anyone got advice on this?
'What we do in life echoes in eternity'
-Maximus, Gladiator
Why do you need to rhyme? Pretty cliche.
'Beauty stands and waits with gravity to start her death-defying leap. And he, a little charleychaplin man, who may or may not catch her fair eternal form spreadeagled in the empty air of existence.' - Laurence Felinghetti, 'The Acrobat'
i want it to be cliche, thats the thing. i never write with ryhmes at all.
'What we do in life echoes in eternity'
-Maximus, Gladiator
rhyming is no more cliche than free verse... it's only 'amateurish' if not done well... as is anything that's written...
raith... email me and i'll help you with it... i write both rhymed and unrhymed poetry and i mentor many aspiring poets...
meanwhile, just google for a rhyming dictionary and put the one you like best in your favorites file, so you can get to it easily... even better is to get yourself a good print one... i use 'webter's new world rhyming dictionary' [pb, $11 new... used cheapies available @ amazon] in print and http://www.rhymezone.com/ online...
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omgosh MMM, that helped. thanks a lot. :]
'What we do in life echoes in eternity'
-Maximus, Gladiator
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