My first novel is finished. Well, it being more like 217 pages of raw material, some heavy 2nd drafting is next.

Actually, my writing style is buried dinosaur bones. To dig them up, I've decided to learn from my favorite writers, ie Gaiman, Barker.

Does anyone know how I can find analyses and notes on other novels, and which novels I can learn from?
Also, guides to writing styles?

("google it" notwithstanding, of course)