Thread: My new character

i have a new character, he is called Chang. he is a who is using the power of his superiors, to do his own bedding. he is the main antagonist, and wants to destroy the protagonist.

pls let me know what you think???

pls be gentle....

Okay, firstly we need to know what his powers are. We also have to know his character, how he behaves and what he wants to accomplish. All of this fits in as to how good he is.

You need to be more specific, other than telling us that this guy wants to have his superiors arrange his bed.

Sorry, had to crack the joke. It's "bidding," not "bedding."

Seriously, more detail is needed. What you described us is what basically all antagonists do, make a protagonist's life hell. If you could detail more of his character and behaviors, then we could chip in ideas of our own.

Yea I must agree with Fuhrer and Custard. Unfortunately I cannot help much either because you have not provided enough information for us to work with. Perhaps explain your character in a little more detail, that will allow us to help you.

P.S. I enjoyed your joke Fuhrer