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    The word "that"

    This may sounds weird, but the question I was wondering and has always bothered me, can you use "that" twice in a row? Here is an example:

    In Sherlock Holmes by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, it says "There were the marks of the horse's hoofs, too, the outline of one of which was far more clearly cut than that of the other three, showing that that was a new shoe."

    There are a lot more examples in the book, and I do it a lot, but I never see it much anywhere else. Is it an old thing that nobody does anymore?

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    I do it, both in my fiction writings and in explaining things.
    They call me Spooky, Spooky Mulder. A joke to my peers and an annoyance to my superiors. Whose sister was abducated by aliens when he was a kid, and now runs around with a badge and gun yelling to anyone who is listening that the fix is in and when it hits, it'll be the crapstorm of all time.

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    I try to use that as little as possible in my writing. It can nearly always be avoided, and many will say it is a weak and unnecessary word. Sometimes I find it a necessary evil. To use it consecutively would have me breaking out in a cold sweat. Not for me.
    The sand of the desert is sodden red, -
    Red with the wreck of a square that broke; -
    The Gatling's jammed and the colonel dead,
    And the regiment blind with dust and smoke.
    The river of death has brimmed his banks,
    And England's far, and Honour a name,
    But the voice of schoolboy rallies the ranks,
    "Play up! play up! and play the game!"

    Vitai Lampada (Sir Henry Newbolt, 1897)

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    I'd prefer '...showing that it was a new shoe.'

    I've seen '...had had...' in a nick Hornby book. I think it looks clumsey, like '...that that...'.

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    I prefer old. The "...that that..." makes sense, as well as "...had had...". But I know if I were to use it now, I'd be asked to replace it.
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    I use "that that" and "had had" often. I also use was was
    Last edited by Liedes; 05-14-2011 at 08:56 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by spider8 View Post
    I'd prefer '...showing that it was a new shoe.''.
    Yeah, a better example of a double that would have been interesting.

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    It can be avoided. Writing is work, so just use your noggin to find the 'write' combo of words...but please never that that....or had had...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Liedes View Post
    I also use was was
    How does that work?
    “The greatest achievement was at first and for a time a dream. The oak sleeps in the acorn, the bird waits in the egg, and in the highest vision of the soul a waking angel stirs. Dreams are the seedlings of realities.” ~ James Allen

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    I have just had work returned by an editor suggesting I replace a phrase with one that contained 'had had'. I asked why and he replied 'convention'.

    I used to be a serial that user...I'm better now.

    If I see a 'that that' I think twat twat!

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    showing that that was a new shoe.
    If one were replacing a that would one replace that that that refered to the showing or that that that refered to the new shoe?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Olly Buckle View Post
    If one were replacing a that would one replace that that that refered to the showing or that that that refered to the new shoe?
    Olly... English please.
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    Originally Posted by Olly Buckle
    If one were replacing a that would one replace that that that refered to the showing or that that that refered to the new shoe?
    Okay, Mr Smartypants, here's one just for you. Use the word 'and' five times consecutively in a sentence.

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    That's the one about the repainted pub sign not having enough space between Fox and and and and and hounds.
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    I'm having fun here.
    “The greatest achievement was at first and for a time a dream. The oak sleeps in the acorn, the bird waits in the egg, and in the highest vision of the soul a waking angel stirs. Dreams are the seedlings of realities.” ~ James Allen

    "Use what talents you possess: the woods would be very silent if no birds sang there except those that sang best." ~ Henry Van Dyke


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