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    Where to start

    I want to write a story. Images have been in my head of ideas but I dont know where to begin.

    Any tips.

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    Bob watched as ten dwarves pushed a shopping trolley full of garden gnomes past him.

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    Jump into the middle of a bit of action, then go back and explain how the fight started or why the dwarves wanted the garden gnomes to begin with. Then write till you get to the end and stop. And thinking about it too much won't help. You have to start putting words together. If you have the images, you should describe them, fit them together, make the words create what you want.

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    Bob watched as ten dwarves pushed a shopping trolley full of garden gnomes past him.
    'Have you swapped my Lambert & Butler for them Jamaican woodbines again, Elsie?' he said, eyeing his wife suspiciously. Returning his attention to the surreal scene before him, he was drawn to how the dwarves sported white beards, wore pointed hats, and had fishing rods slung over their shoulders. He looked at the gnomes, and at the dwarves again, and once more at the gnomes. Strange, he thought, you can't tell 'em apart.

    The sand of the desert is sodden red, -
    Red with the wreck of a square that broke; -
    The Gatling's jammed and the colonel dead,
    And the regiment blind with dust and smoke.
    The river of death has brimmed his banks,
    And England's far, and Honour a name,
    But the voice of schoolboy rallies the ranks,
    "Play up! play up! and play the game!"

    Vitai Lampada (Sir Henry Newbolt, 1897)

    From the Home of Sir Henry Newbolt (a blog)



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    Agreed. Write all the bits that are in your head, with notes around each situation if you have them. You can flesh out the bits in between later

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    If you have the images, you should describe them, fit them together,
    This, getting into the description of a physical object has often been a good starter for me, it need not be at the beginning.
    A Read for the Train, a collection of short stories, flash fiction and verse. Its cheaper on Lulu, 25% discount.
    http://www.lulu.com/shop/oliver-buck...-18812406.html

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    Start outlining the universe and story. If you don't have a story, just concepts, write them down and start trying to figure out how to put them all together. After that, just jump in and start writing! Your muse will direct you

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    Thank you for the tips. There is this scientific idea about cybernetic cloning in my head that might work if done well. I had better get started.

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    Quote Originally Posted by InsanityStrickenWriter View Post
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    Bob watched as ten dwarves pushed a shopping trolley full of garden gnomes past him.
    Quote Originally Posted by garza View Post
    Jump into the middle of a bit of action, then go back and explain how the fight started or why the dwarves wanted the garden gnomes to begin with. Then write till you get to the end and stop. And thinking about it too much won't help. You have to start putting words together. If you have the images, you should describe them, fit them together, make the words create what you want.
    Quote Originally Posted by Bilston Blue View Post
    'Have you swapped my Lambert & Butler for them Jamaican woodbines again, Elsie?' he said, eyeing his wife suspiciously. Returning his attention to the surreal scene before him, he was drawn to how the dwarves sported white beards, wore pointed hats, and had fishing rods slung over their shoulders. He looked at the gnomes, and at the dwarves again, and once more at the gnomes. Strange, he thought, you can't tell 'em apart.

    How many times must I say this? It's not dwarves, it's dwarfs. Dwarves are where dboats tie up.

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    Dictionaries adapt to usage (As garza has so rightly pointed out before). Nowadays Dwarrow is listed as archaic and dwarf is listed as having variable plurals. Perhaps you too will soon be archaic.
    A Read for the Train, a collection of short stories, flash fiction and verse. Its cheaper on Lulu, 25% discount.
    http://www.lulu.com/shop/oliver-buck...-18812406.html

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    I was just funning around, mate. How else would I get my punch line in?

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