Hi, I have written the first draft of a novel. The basic story is a father and daughter who are re-united after many years and have to face up to and overcome various things from their history in order to move forward. There is a bit of a sub-plot with the father's employer, which links in towards the end. Anyway, the main problem I have is that it's not very long, at about 40000 words. It's not a "short story" but I realise it's also not really long enough to be a novel, so what do I do?
Should I make it longer, and if so, how? Should I "pad out" what i've already written with further description, characterisation etc. or should I add further sub-plot (s)? Or would all of this just detract from the story, and should I just accept it the length it is?
Another challenge I have is that the story takes place over a long period of time. Most books I read are thrillers which tend to take place in "real time". I'm struggling a bit to link the events together. How should I do this? "Many months later...." seems a bit lame!
Finally, can anybody recommend any novels which I could read to get an idea of how this type of novel works? Family-type sagas, taking place over time as a series of events? As I say, its not the sort of book I usually read, but I really like the story so i'd like to make it work.
Sorry for such a long-winded question(s) - any help is much-appreciated!
Thanks, Phil



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