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"It must be a great day in hell since she's cooling off the place." I chuckled to myself.
"It must be a cool day in hell now she's there." I chuckled to myself.
"It must be a great day in hell since she's cooling off the place." I chuckled to myself.
"It must be a cool day in hell now she's there." I chuckled to myself.
Hi Kay
I like the second one, though the sentence could be strengthened by losing some superfluous words. How about, 'It'll be cool in hell now she's there,' I chuckled. Just a thought.
Scott.
The sand of the desert is sodden red, -
Red with the wreck of a square that broke; -
The Gatling's jammed and the colonel dead,
And the regiment blind with dust and smoke.
The river of death has brimmed his banks,
And England's far, and Honour a name,
But the voice of schoolboy rallies the ranks,
"Play up! play up! and play the game!"
Vitai Lampada (Sir Henry Newbolt, 1897)
From the Home of Sir Henry Newbolt (a blog)
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