Thread: I requIIre some HeLLLLLLLLp .... AnyOneeeE???? :)

Hello there everyone!

how are you guys? well anyway i'm here and well ermm.. i NEED help urgently please

I am half way writing a personal essay.. and well i would like to know if anyone of you guys could voluntere to check it and see from your point of view.. u know like if i need to add something or so .. .. well ofcourse it needs to be someone who is good in literature and so .. can u please let me know.

thnkzz to All

PS: ermmm.. well seeing im new here i really dont know any of the forum's rules so im so so so sorry if anything i mentioned is against the rules..

okzz well THANKKZZ again\


bye to ALLL

CocKTaIL

First off there is a link to the rules in my signature, bottom of the post, they are not long or difficult so please take a moment to look.

As for help, well that tends to be what we do, look through the creative forums and decide which suits it best, for an essay possibly non fiction, then post it there with a suitable title (see the rules and guidelines) and see what people say. If you want to increase your chances of getting a response become part of the community so people think "Cocktail, yea they helped someone the other day, I wonder what they write?".

Meantime I check my posts every so often, I shall keep an eye out to see if your post count goes up.

Originally Posted by Olly Buckle

First off there is a link to the rules in my signature, bottom of the post, they are not long or difficult so please take a moment to look.

As for help, well that tends to be what we do, look through the creative forums and decide which suits it best, for an essay possibly non fiction, then post it there with a suitable title (see the rules and guidelines) and see what people say. If you want to increase your chances of getting a response become part of the community so people think "Cocktail, yea they helped someone the other day, I wonder what they write?".

Meantime I check my posts every so often, I shall keep an eye out to see if your post count goes up.

Thankz Olly.. I read the rules.. i am sorry i didnt know.. And thanks for the advice .. appreciated. I am waiting until i finish my essay then i will post it .. It sounds quite exciting.. sorry again..

Thankz

cockTail

Cocktail - You indicate you only want people who write 'literature' to comment. By literature do you mean fiction?

I don't mean to be rude but is English your first language? If not there are excellent resources available on this site and throughout the web on proper spelling, grammar, and capitalization.

Originally Posted by garza

Cocktail - You indicate you only want people who write 'literature' to comment. By literature do you mean fiction?

well... I mean anyone but prefferably i would like someone who has a talent for english literature.. including fiction, non fiction or anything


thanks

Originally Posted by Cambyses

I don't mean to be rude but is English your first language? If not there are excellent resources available on this site and throughout the web on proper spelling, grammar, and capitalization.

Yes, ofcourse english is my first language although i'm not really good at grammer and spelling.

Thankz for the advice

I think what Cambyses was trying nicely to say is that people would take you a bit more seriously if you actually composed a post with actual English instead of text speak. There is a large difference between being bad at spelling and text speak. Your random capitalization and cutesy creative spelling make it seem like you are just trolling around joking not actually looking for serious help. If you want someone else to take you seriously you need to first take yourself seriously.

Originally Posted by Kat

I think what Cambyses was trying nicely to say is that people would take you a bit more seriously if you actually composed a post with actual English instead of text speak. There is a large difference between being bad at spelling and text speak. Your random capitalization and cutesy creative spelling make it seem like you are just trolling around joking not actually looking for serious help. If you want someone else to take you seriously you need to first take yourself seriously.

Oh thanks Kat. I am so sorry. I am definately not joking or trolling. I just got too used to writing like that on the net. I just want someone to help me with my essay.

Hey, u know why not like post u'r essay and see what like replies u get?

Originally Posted by spider8

Hey, u know why not like post u'r essay and see what like replies u get?

Thanks Spider

Yeah i will do so soon. I was thinking of posting it in the Writer's Workshop. What do you think?

If it's for school and not for possible publication then Non-Fiction would be fine.

If someone shows up with an earnest question, I think we could all be a little more tolerant of their way of asking. Outside of a the workshops it is not necessary to comment on someone's writing style.

Welcome to WF, Cocktail . As the others have said, non-fiction is a great place to put your essay.

Thanks guys. No problem, i will post it in the non-fiction section

Originally Posted by caelum

If someone shows up with an earnest question, I think we could all be a little more tolerant of their way of asking.

I agree, just totally. But I like just, like couldn't help myself