In my opinion, discussion forums dedicated to writing are NOT a good place to post your works-in-progress except in brief excerpts for really specific purposes, i.e., "Should I take this paragraph out?" or "Something's wrong with this verse, I don't know what."
You're right that "no one" wants to, or has the time to, read your longy-longy-long-long work in progress, especially if it's really rough. If you post something that's over, say, 2000 words, that's going to take even a fast reader some time to read, and most of us are checking out this site when we are supposed to be working at our day jobs or in school--therefore, it's like you are asking me to take a half hour or more out of my day, if I really want to do the right thing by your work in progress! I have to take the time to read and then re-read it, and then post a reply that includes some helpful suggestions or praise. (For free.)
Also keep in mind that this is the internet, and just because there are forum rules everyone is supposed to follow about being nice to other members of the board does not mean that everyone you encounter is going to be nice, or have your best interests at heart.
This leads me to the subject of editing services. I guess that some publishers will not take copy that has not been professionally edited, and sometimes that costs a lot of $$$, so if you're really serious about publishing you're gonna have to shell out for them at some point.
But from the tone and general demeanor of your post, it's clear that you are not ready for that, and you KNOW it. Why waste $1000 USD or more on an editor, when the publisher won't take your MS anyway?
An editor who solicits your business is not a safe bet. I can go into all kinds of reasons why that is the case, but I'll just give one really brief example:
I learned on an internet discussion forum that a couple of the members had started their own "publishing company" and that they were soliciting manuscripts. I thought that was cool. I offered to be a slush reader for them for free, thinking that I would get in on the bottom rung, so to speak. As far as submitting pieces to their magazine they were starting, I didn't want to submit any of my stuff because I don't do the type of writing that they were soliciting for.
So they were glad to have me read from their slush pile for free and started sending me MSs. They sent me some MSs that REALLY STANK, too. I read the first one all the way through, though it nearly killed me. The second one I sent back and said, "This is unprintable, it needs too much work, just tell them no."
They replied that I was supposed to read each MS and EDIT it where I thought that it needed editing. I was like, "WTF...?"
Then I figured out (duh!) that these "publishers" were actually EDITORS, and they were getting paid to fix these truly atrocious MSs for aspiring writers.
So I quit. I didn't b1tch them out or anything, but I sort of wanted to.
So: Caveat emptor, right?
At this point in your writing career, what you need is someone who will read and critique your stuff for free, right? Until you get to the point that you can seriously consider submitting your work,
Someone like.... a friend, maybe...?
Sure, you don't want to have your friends and family look at your writing; hardly anyone does. You need some friends that share your love for writing, maybe some who are at the same stage in their writing careers that you are.
And THAT'S what the internet discussion forum is good for--so that you can connect with other people who share your interests, perhaps get on friendly terms with them, post a few short things on the forum so that people can marvel at your work without having to commit hours to helping you for free--and find someone who will agree to read, critique, and perhaps edit your work in progress.
On the discussion forum you can find links to information that will help your writing, and resources. You can learn about magazines that will accept unsolicited MSs, and maybe make a couple of professional contacts with writers who are already published.
Any writer who posts pieces of extreme length and density on an internet discussion forum, expecting serious feedback on those pieces, almost certainly dooms him/herself to frustration and anger.
That's the best advice I can give ya, right there. Also I agree with the others who have posted that really the best thing to do is to start submitting finished pieces to publishers--that's the best kind of feedback you can get, really.
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